Age/Gender: 21, Male
Location: Lancaster, UK
Job: Student
"You want a government to lead you in your wars and ensure your prosperity. What governments actually do is draft you to fight their wars, and enslave you to ensure their prosperity." - God, allegedly
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Latest Flash Reviews
RIP LC man, fucking Hell
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Crush Tibet.
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First piece of advice - don't spend the author's comments telling us how bad the movie is. And get rid of the frame saying the exact same thing, too. We'll make our own minds up and it comes across like a blammable flash with all those disclaimers about quality.
Also, make it longer, or make the intro shorter - for a 'short' like this I shouldn't be expected to sit through any pointlessness.
Also, voice-act rather than using speech bubbles.
The animation is very nice and the graphics are lovely too. The blood effects are beyond reproach. A very fluid and pleasing-to-view cartoonish style.
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Latest Audio Reviews
could do with some extra brutality - more guitars maybe - but it's pretty good. It's got a good progression throughout it, and the drummer does some good rolls. Maybe a little more technicality by the guitarists, too.
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The beat and rhythm line is very very nice, props for that. But you do need to work on your flow and try to annunciate a little better. If you're gonna insist on playing the bassline out for a long period of time then maybe you could put another melody over the top. And tbh I wasn't at all interested in the lyrics. But you've definitely got potential.
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Livecorpse would've loved it.
Great expressionism in this song, too. A lot of work was clearly put into it and it paid off.
Good way to pay your respects.
Author's Response:
Thanks man, I only wish he could be here to hear it.
Thanks for listening and thanks for your review!
Mike
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