could do with some extra brutality - more guitars maybe - but it's pretty good. It's got a good progression throughout it, and the drummer does some good rolls. Maybe a little more technicality by the guitarists, too.
Nice beat bro
The beat and rhythm line is very very nice, props for that. But you do need to work on your flow and try to annunciate a little better. If you're gonna insist on playing the bassline out for a long period of time then maybe you could put another melody over the top. And tbh I wasn't at all interested in the lyrics. But you've definitely got potential.
Livecorpse would've loved it.
Great expressionism in this song, too. A lot of work was clearly put into it and it paid off.
Good way to pay your respects.
Thanks man, I only wish he could be here to hear it.
Thanks for listening and thanks for your review!
Very nice there
A real musical piece, delicately written with a lot of heart behind it. Well made,always moving and with a very nice drum pattern and texture pattern. The repetition works fine, too. :)
thanks for the review. i wanted the first thing i submitted to be really good. i might submit something else alittle soothing like this again, then pick up the pace somewhat. but thanks alot for the kind words!
Very relaxing and well made. Doesn't seem finished, though... it's missing something. And Iron Fox isn't a particularly good title, in all honesty, for this piece.
its what goes in with the mind, titles are just what we consider names to tag something
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