Wow. Just wow.
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good?
Jesus Christ.
You are my hero, Earfetish.
I hope there are a lot more violent ones to come ;)
I'll do some good shit soon, I've had to write decent material recently because I get graded on it
Nice. I look forward to seeing more from you, your writing always amazes me.
cheers
That was fucking brilliant mate, you really had me going for a couple of paragraghs there. No foolin'
thanks man, I went to a lot of effort to make it ooky
fuckin awesome homie, i read all the stuff on your site/blog, keep up the sick work.
SEIG HEIL
Yeah darkness is cool. I'd go with a less direct approach for this particular subject but that's just my opinion.
Nice shtuff.
good point. I did think it was kinda blatant, maybe even touching on cliche. Little subtlety really.
Wow. You're a beast. I should probably hate you for being a better writer than I am, but I can't really complain, since I haven't really tried writing a new story in months. (I'm fucking lazy.) Besides -- and I don't know if I mentioned this to you already -- the last story I submitted on Papertank.com was, I think, partially influenced by your writings. (My girlfriend didn't like that.) Oh, and speaking of Papertank, post some more stuff there. We could always use more talent.
Why thank you. I'll go there soon, exams and shit atm. Time for forums, but not creative writing or reading + criticising.
you beat me anyway
I'll confess here that I've not actually read any other entries, I'll surely do that at some point
I think I started reading your stories when I was eleven, which really doesn't seem too good. But it influenced to write, albeit shitty writings.
As usual, I liked it.
good stuff
I started writing dirty shit when I was like 13 anyway
swell
thank you dave
Thanks for voting for me.
wish I hadn't now, fag
It's pretty damn good, would have been better if you gave it some sort of climax though. There's too many loose ends, but I'm sure that's what you're aiming for.
Now that I think about it, maybe that's a good thing. Makes the reader think and such. It's a great writing piece.
you're too nice. It sucks, there should be a damn climax. I suck at plot.
Not bad, I actually believed you for a bit there.
fuckyou
fuckyoutoo
make more stories you bum!
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Amazing writing. Also did you ever figure out what the jerk was? I was always told that it was your body shutting down to fast, and jerks you awake in order to shut down right.
I've heard it's because when we were monkeys we'd do it to make sure we weren't falling out of the trees.
Doesn't happen to me that often. My inspiration was falling asleep next to someone who had taken many drugs and he kept doing it, so I think it might be just your mind having difficulty shutting down.
that only happens to me when I'm falling asleep somewhere bright and noisy. Nice story.
I only read the first few paragraphs but that happened to me 8 or 9 times last night.
sometimes it happens to me quite a lot too. Not the whole 'blackness' thing but the jerking thing.
woah look how quickly I'm responding to this comment
Whoa, now that I read the entire thing, that sounds like a god read. If you wrote that you're talented, man. But wouldn't that be freeing though? To just do whatever you want without answering to yourself? I've had that problem time and time again, almost on a daily basis. To want to do something - alot of the times it's good for you, to get it out of the way - but once your moments away from doing it you chicken out by "re-thinking" it. That would be freeing but at the same time dangerous- as explained in the text.
Good read, man.
thank you very much sire
Can you link me to a good one like this? I'm going through you web page and can't stomach half of them. lol Where's a good read that WON'T make me puke? Like this one.
http://earfetish.abortedfoetus.co m/dignity-the-dangers-of-alcohol/
http://earfetish.abortedfoetus.co m/amnesia/
http://earfetish.abortedfoetus.co m/rubbish/
Very cool story man. Two thumbs up.
thanks boss
alexjustdoit
Interesting to read but are you suggesting something or did you just make this up as creative writing?
Earfetish (Updated )
I'm actually Richard Chase, reincarnated