Impressive voice acting and musical work and my own generosity made me vote this a 5, but really the animation is pretty awful, so good luck passing judgement. I know animation takes ages and ages, but what can you do?

If this doesn't pass, I'd suggest keeping the sounds and audio and completely rejigging the animation. Make it visually exciting - movement should be constant. Like when they are talking in the rain, the raindrops should be moving; when the kid's name has been stolen you could have his face trembling or something. There should be animation in pretty much every frame; still images don't cut it.

The voice acting and atmosphere and music is exceptionally good though,

I still love this

RIP LC man, fucking Hell

Praise be to China.

Crush Tibet.

The paper bit made me laugh. Shows lots of potential.

worth $100

nice vocals

could do with some extra brutality - more guitars maybe - but it's pretty good. It's got a good progression throughout it, and the drummer does some good rolls. Maybe a little more technicality by the guitarists, too.

Nice beat bro

The beat and rhythm line is very very nice, props for that. But you do need to work on your flow and try to annunciate a little better. If you're gonna insist on playing the bassline out for a long period of time then maybe you could put another melody over the top. And tbh I wasn't at all interested in the lyrics. But you've definitely got potential.